2、avycasualtieswerereportedhouseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies”Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythest
3、udentsuseofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhighshouldthewaterinthebottleboildrywhilenooneisaroundtoturnoffthepower.Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc.Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshad
4、beentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher.Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.
5、Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文语言点提示：(1)此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies常可作为过渡句，引出下文were（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如arealarmedbyreported，wereburneddown，weredamaged，Facedwith。were第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂语言点提示：electricwater-heaters电热水器第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注
7、findyouhavenopantstowear,youdbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangingwidelyfrombikes,cellphones,purses,pre-paidICcardstosunglasses
8、,bags,andevenunderwear.Inshort,anythingthatworthadimeislikelytobestolen.WhatmakesstudentstheeasytargetsThereasonsarenothardtofind.ButIbelieveofallthesereasons,thelackofanti-theftalertnessisthemostimportant.Forlackofalertness,thestudentstendtoleavethedoorsandwindowswideopenduringsleepatnoonoratnight
9、insummer.Forthesamereason,theyllalsoleavetheirbikesunlockedbeforeastoreorbyaroad,orforgettotakeawaytheirpersonalstuffbeforetheygooutoftheclassroomtomakeaphonecall.Theseactsundoubtedlyhaveincreasedtheirexposuretothelight-fingeredmonsters.Inordertominimizepossiblelosses,thestudentsmuststayonguardinthe
10、firstplace,asawarenessofthetheftsaroundoftenmakesabigdifference.Tobemorespecific,thestudentsshouldnothideanytemptingamountofcashinthedorm.Putitinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleaveanyvaluableitemsunattended.Takethemwhereveryougo.Inaddition,itsadvisabletodevelopaneighbourhoodwatchprogrammewithotherstud
11、entsinthedormandneighbouringdorms.第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况语言点提示：itseemsthat此句型表示一种可能性第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因语言点提示：(1)Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets此句引出下文(2)anti-theftalertness防盗意识(3)lackofalertness缺乏警惕(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识语言点提示：注意关联词语inthefirstplace,Besides,Inaddition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。HowW
13、rldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife.Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainw
14、iderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetiftheydseekinternationalcooperationorfunding.Commonfolkslikeusalsorelyonthecyberworldinvariousways,forcommunication,entertainment,bank
15、ingandshopping.True,thepoweroftheInternetisallpervasiveanditsmanynegativeeffectsarealreadyvisible.Forexample,Internetaddictstendtowithdrawtotheirownfantasyworldratherthancommunicatewitharealperson.Childrenareexposedtoonlinepornographyandviolence.Internetfraudsareaneverydayoccurrence.Inviewofallthis,
16、youareadvisedtousetheInternetwithwisdom.Keepitatasafedistanceandneverloseyourself.第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题,第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。语言点提示：hasdrawn.,realized,andprovided此为谓语连动式的运用。第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系,先总述,后分述。语言点提示：resortto借助、诉诸、求助于第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖,再谈对此的看法。语言点提示：（1）negative
17、effects副作用、反面作用2)addicts成瘾者、依恋者（3）fantasyworld虚拟世界、虚幻世界（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗【范文二】Asaprimarysourceofinformationaswellasanefficientmeansofcommunication,theInternetofferspeopleacolourfulandconvenientlife.Justbyclickingthemouse,wecanenjoyabrilliantandeasylifethatcouldnotbeachievedeverbefo
18、re:shopping,makingfriends,contactingrelatives,lookingforjobs,downloadingmusicandmovies,conductingbusinessdeals,andfreelyairingouropinions.Foritsconvenience,theInternethasattractedpeoplelikemagnetsandsomepeopleevenclaimthatitisindispensable.Tothem,lifecantgoonwithoutit.Everydaymillionsofpeoplespendho
19、ursonendsurfingtheInternet.Theyareobsessedwithitsomuchsothattheyforgetmanyotherimportantmatters.Asforme,IdontapproveofunrestrainedInternetreliance.AlthoughtheInternetisagiftofthetechnologicalrevolutionandablessingofthisinformationage,weshouldneverletitcontrolourlife.TheInternetabsolutelydoesntmeanth
21、要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。【范文】CrazeforCivilServiceExaminationsEveryyearhundredsofthousandsofpeopleinChinatakecivilserviceexamsconductedatvariouslevelsinthehopeofbecominggovernmentemployees.Amongthem,collegegraduatesareafast-growingforcethatcantbeignored.Thecrazeforbeingacivilse
22、rvantisnotlimitedtoliberalartsmajors,asitsalsogainingpopularityamongscienceandengineeringstudents.Inthefinalanalysis,thisgrowingtrendamongtheyoungstersismainlyattributabletotwofactorsambitionsandcomforts.Ontheonehand,manyambitiouscollegegraduatesviewtheseexamsasaspringboardtoahighersocialstatus,grea
23、terpowerandprestige,onwhichmanyoftheirotherwishesrest.Ontheother,asbeingacivilservantgenerallymeansastableincome,enviablehealthcareandpensionprogrammes,aswellasothercomfortsoflife,itsquiteanappealingcareeroptiontomanypeople,especiallyinthisageofsluggishworldeconomy.Personally,thedesiretobeagovernmen
24、tofficialisbeyondreproach,asthenationandthepeopledoneedaninjectionofnewbloodintothecivilservicesectors.Thefresh-facedcollegegraduates,armedwithloftyideals,newvision,andstrongdrive,areundoubtedlyamongthebestcandidates.第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。语言点提示：liber
25、alartsmajors文科专业学生第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。语言点提示：(1)Ontheonehand.Ontheother起到衔接上文作用(2)isattributableto归因于(3)sluggishworldeconomy衰退的世界经济第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。语言点提示：beyondreproach无可厚非五)IsitNecessarytoAttendTrainingClasses现在社会上有各种各样的培训班有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要3.你的观点审题概述这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上
27、ongthemlanguagecrashcoursesforvarioustests,suchasCET,BEC,TOFEL,IELTS,GREandsoforth,areespeciallynoticeableforitswiderangeandhighattendancerate.Someconsideritadvisabletoattendsuchclasseswhileothersbelieveitunnecessary.Theformerarguesthatitsfarmoreeffectivetocommandthesespecialskillswiththehelpofanexp
28、eriencedtrainerthantoworkatthemontheirown.Theyareconvincedthatthesetrainingclassescanmakeupforwhatisnottaughtinschool,hence,morecompetitiveedgeovertheirpeers.Thelattergroupofpeople,nonetheless,criticizeitasasheerwasteofresources.Theywarnthatthequalityofmosttrainingcoursesisquestionable,astheyaremark
29、etedtogetmoneyoutofourpocketratherthangetknowledgeintoourhead.AsfarasIamconcerned,alittlebitofsuchspecialtrainingdoesusnoharm,buttoomuchofitcanonlyprovetobecounter-productive.Anyhow,thedeprivedfreetimecanbebetterinvestedinrecreationatweekends,talkingtoanoldfriend,orsimplyenjoyingalong-overduevacatio
30、n.第一段思路点评：第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。语言点提示：（1）agreatdiversityof各种各样的（2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加（3）languagecrashcourses语言速成课程第二段思路点评：先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。语言点提示：注意连接词语while,Theformer,They,Thelattergroupofpeople等的使用，强化了上下文之间的连贯性。第三段思路点评：辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。语言点提示：（1）asfarasIamconcern
32、ybagyouboughtyesterday.”“IheartheJack&Jonesstoreisonsalethisweek.Doyouwannacomealong”Dontfeelsurprisedifyouhearthemcomingoutofthemouthofcollegestudents.Itsquitecommontohearandseecollegestudentsswappinginformationaboutthebrandstheylikeandtheproductstheyuse.Infact,discussionsaboutbrandnameshavebecome
33、oneofthecollegestudentsfavouritepastimes.Theylearnaboutthelatestfashionfromeachother,exchangetipsaboutwhenandwheretogettheitem,andbuyitattheirearliestconvenience.“KeepingupwiththeJoneses”istheirconviction“IftheJoneseshaveit,howcouldIhavenot”Aboutthiscurrentmindsetofthecollegestudents,manypeoplemayh
34、astentoshowtheirdisapproval.Theyllprobablytakeittobeareflectionofthestudentsvanityandsuperficiality.Andtheymaylecturethemonthevirtueofbeingthrifty.However,Ibegtodiffer.Foronething,name-brandproductsareusuallyqualityproducts.Assuch,theyaresomethingbeautiful,endurable,andreliable.“Theloveofbeautyiscom
35、montoall,”goestheproverb;therefore,theresnothingtoblameaboutthepursuitoffamousbrands.Fortheother,collegestudentsareoldenoughtomaketheirowndecisions.Likewise,theymustabidebytheconsequencesiftheymakeanill-advisedone.Iftheylettheirpursuitofbrandseatintotheirbudgetforothermoreimportantissues,theyshouldb
36、eabletocorrecttheirmistakesandkeepeverythinginmoderation.Sothisbecomesnootherthanagoodchancetolearnmanagement,isntit第一段思路点评：本段分为两个部分，即详细陈述大学生追求和使用名牌的情况，以及人们对此的看法。语言点提示：（1）keepingupwiththeJoneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人（2）conviction坚定的信仰、看法（七）KnowledgeandDiploma目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识你的观点审题概述这是一篇
38、Likeitornot,theredoesexistasocialrealitythehigherdiplomasonegets,themorepopularhebecomes.Onthecontrary,otherpeopleclaimthatahighdiplomadoesntautomaticallytranslateintoknowledge.Adiploma,intheireyes,isonlytheacknowledgmentofoneseducationalexperienceratherthanaguaranteeofonesability.Therefore,wecannev
39、ermeasurethedepthofonesknowledgebythegradeofonesdiploma.Besides,manyknowledgeablepeopledonthaveahighdiploma.TakeBillGatesforexample.Hisdroppingoutofcollegecannotdenythefactthatheisoneoftheworldsmostlearnedmen.SoImustsaynooneshouldeverequateadiplomawithknowledge,becauseadiplomaisnothingbutaproofofash
40、ort-termstudywhilegenuineknowledgeneedsoneslifelongdevotion.第一段思路点评：先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。语言点提示：jobcandidate求职者、应聘者第二段思路点评：详细论述文凭并不等于能力。语言点提示：Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢第三段思路点评：使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。语言点提示：（1）equateadiplomawithknowledge把文凭与知识划等号（2）nothingbutaproofofashort-termstudy只是短期学习的证明（八）T
42、hanzhaiwatches,talkthroughshanzhaicellphones,playshanzhaivideogames,useshanzhaicomputers,evenwatchshanzhaiTVshows.Onceatermusedbeforesomeelectronicproductstosuggestacopycatversionofinferiorquality,shanzhainowsuggeststomanyChinesecreativityandtrendiness.Withthemediaallovertheriseofshanzhaiculture,pub
43、licopinionsareclearlydivided.Advocatesinvariablyassociateitwithinnovation,stylishness,theDIYspirit,open-mindednessandpracticality,asshanzhaiproductsoftenmiximitationwithinnovationasimilarskinbutadifferentheart.Theendproductsareusuallymorefunctionalandmuchcheaperthantheoriginal.Besides,theyrespondtot
44、hemarketmoreswiftlyandtheyaremoreconsiderateindesign.Thankstothem,morepeopleatthegrassrootslevelcanenjoythebenefitofmoderntechnology.However,otherpeople,includingmyself,holdmorereservedattitudestowardstheshanzhaifever.Forallthepopularityithaswon,acopycatisacopycat.Themockeryoftheprestigeproductsnoto
45、nlystealstheirprofitsbutalsoupsetsmarketcompetition.Moreover,shanzhaiproductsthriveonthecurrentlegalloopholes.Underthedisguiseofanti-dominanceslogans,theymakeillegalprofitsbyviolatingintellectualpropertyrightsandevadingtaxes.Andtotopitoff,theso-calledinnovationisonlysenselesstalkastrueinnovationalwa
46、ysfaceshugecostsandpotentialfailures,whileplagiarismsimplybuildssuccessonotherpeoplesrisks.第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。语言点提示：.publicopinionsareclearlydivided此句起承上启下的作用第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。语言点提示：（1）miximitationwithinnovation混淆模仿与创新（2）respondtothemarket对市场做出反应第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。语言点提示：（1）Themockeryofthe
48、版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。【范文】ItsTimetoStopSoftwarePiracyChinahasoftenbeencriticizedfortherampantpracticeofsoftwarepiracy.Takealookaround.WeoperateonpiratedWindowssystems,defendPCsecuritywithpiratedKasperskyanti-virusprogrammes,processfileswithpiratedMicrosoftOffice,draft3Ddesig
49、nswithpiratedAutoCAD,refinepictureswithpiratedAdobePhotoshop,andstudyEnglishwithpiratedKingsoftselectronicdictionariesandtranslators.Itsnoexaggerationthatpiratedsoftwareiseverywhere.Thelogicbehindthephenomenonissimpleandclear:ifapiratedcopyisavailableforjustatinyfractionofthenormalprice,nottospeakof
50、manyofthefreedownloadsonline,whowouldpayforanauthenticcopyCheaperpricesaside,easyaccessisanotherimportantfactor.Withsuchalargegatheringofpiratedupgradesaround,whowouldbothertospendtimeandmoneysearchingthestoresforanauthorizedyetoutdatedversionDespitetheseapparentbenefits,thepracticeofsoftwarepirac
51、yshouldbebanned,becauseitrepresentsunfaircompetitionandbynatureitsano-winsituation.ButhowTwoapproachesaretobetakenatthesametime:Technically,softwaredevelopersshouldenhancetheirantipiracyengineering,sothatcrackingthesoftwareshouldbevirtuallyimpossible.Andlegally,thegovernmentshouldalsotightenitsanti
52、piracylawsandtoughenupthepenalties,sothatviolationsshouldbecostly.第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。语言点提示:therampantpracticeofsoftwarepiracy猖獗的盗版软件第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。语言点提示：（1）downloadsonline在线下载（2）authenticcopy正版第三段思路点评：阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。语言点提示：tightenitsantipiracylawsandtoughenupthepenalties加强反盗版立法
54、sunkintoasevererecession.Itshardtogetthroughadaywithouthearingorreadingnewsaboutthedevastatingeffectsofthecrisis:Aworldofcompaniesgobankrupt,millionsofemployeesarelaidoff,high-returninvestmentbubblesburst,andhugesumsofloanscanneverberetrieved.Itsimpactonourdailylifecanbefeltinallwalksoflife.Colleges
55、tudentsinevitablyfallvictimtothispervasiveslumpaswell.Ontopofthat,internshipsandjobvacanciesarereducedtotheminimumascompanieskeepshrinking.Newgraduatesfindthemselveshardtogetajob,nottospeakofasatisfactoryone.WhatcomesnextPoorstudentswillbehard-pressediftheyfindstudentloansunavailableanymore.Asaresu
56、lt,someevencannotaffordtocontinuetheirstudies.Lastly,morestudentsareprobablyoutthereanxiouslylookingforpart-timejobsnowthattheyhavetohelpcovertheirexpensesinthisgloomyeconomy.Theirinnocenceandeagernessmightbetakenadvantageofbysomemaliciousbusinesspeople,orevencriminalgang.Inresponsetothesethreats,we
57、studentsmustactpromptlyandwisely.Sincewedefinitelywillbefacingacompetitivejobmarket,itscrucialthatwesubmithighqualityresumes.Therefore,wemustcommitmoretoourprofessionalstudies.Evendobetter,mastermorerelevantjobskillsasadoublesecurity.Furthermore,applyforscholarshipsandgrants,asthesearestillavailable
58、andwedonthavetopaythemback.Asforthesafetyissues,trustourinstincttheresnofreelunchinthisworld.Anythingthatpromisesquickreturnswithoutmuchworkisasuretrap.Stayalertandprotectourselves.第一段思路点评：概述金融危机给各行各业造成的影响。语言点提示：（1）severerecession严重衰退（2）devastatingeffects毁灭性的后果（3）gobankrupt破产（4）high-returninvestment
59、bubbles高回报投资泡沫（5）retrieved追回、挽回第二段思路点评：主要论述金融危机给大学生带来影响。语言点提示：（1）slump经济萧条、不景气、经济衰退（2）internships实习（3）fallvictimto被降服、屈服于（4）malicious恶毒的、恶意的第三段思路点评：阐述大学生如何应对金融危机的影响。语言点提示：注意since,therefore,furthermore等关联词的使用，使句间关系更加紧密。议论型作文ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveonCampus有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍，因为.有些人喜欢住在校外，因为我的看法Thereareanin
60、creasingnumberofstudentswhochoosetoliveoffcampus.Parentsanduniversityadministrationsunderstandablyreacteddifferently.Theyvoicedconcernsaboutsecurityandthethreatofoff-campuslifestylesgettingoutofcontrol.However,collegestudentshavetheirownreasonsfortheirchoices.Somestudentsprefertoliveoncampusforthefo