读后续写原文中文Onthedaywhenmymotherletmechooseapetdogfromthekennel,
Diana
cameoverand
startedbitingmyshoelaces.Shewasplayfullyjumpingaroundandlickingme.IknewfromthemomentIsetmyeyesonherthatshewastheperfectdogforme.And,forsomereason,
hergreatenergywaseverythingthatIneeded
inmylife.那天,妈妈让我从犬舍里挑一只宠物狗,戴安娜过来开始咬我的鞋带。她跳来跳去,舔我,非常调皮。从我第一眼看到她的那一刻起,我就知道她是我理想中的狗狗。而且,出于某种原因,她旺盛的精力正是我生活中所需要的。Welivedinaremotearea,andmymotherdidn'tlikemewalkingDianatoolateafterschool.ButIwasateenagerand
lovedgoingagainsttherules,soI
ignoredherwarnings
andsetout
laterthanusual
thatday.我们住在一个偏远的地方,妈妈不喜欢我放学后带戴安娜出去太晚。但我是个青少年,喜欢反抗规则,所以我当天无视了她的警告,比平时更晚地出门了。Asthe
sunset,Icouldn'thelpbut
feelnervous.
Thoughtsfloodedmyheadabout
losingmyway.
Or,worsestill,some
frighteningcreature
cameoutofthedarkunexpectedly.
Thehairsonthebackofmyarmsstoodonend(可以积累这一句).当太阳落山时,我情不自禁地感到紧张。关于迷路的念头涌上心头。更糟糕的是,一些可怕的生物可能会突然从黑暗中出现。我胳膊上的汗毛都竖起来了。Itookadeepbreathtotrytocalmmynerves.Ilookedaroundandcouldjust
makeout
theopensurfaceof
adried-uplake.
Iknewthatmyhomewasn'tfaraway.
Ihadneverwalkedacrossthelakebefore,andmymotherhadwarnedagainstit,butIjustwantedtogethomequickly.
So,ratherthangoingallthewayaroundthelake,IdecidedI'dfeelsafertakingthe
shortcutacrossthelake.我深呼吸试图平静下来。我环顾四周,勉强能看到一个干涸的湖泊。我知道我的家离这里不远。以前我从未穿过湖泊,妈妈也警告过我不要这么做,但我只想尽快回家。所以,与其绕湖走一大圈,我决定走湖泊的捷径会更安全。Dianawentfirst.
Inthe
darklight,Icouldseethatthemuddirectlybelowherpaws
wasdry.
Followingher,Isteppedoutontothelake,butmyfootwentin
alittledeeper
thanexpected.Cautiously,Itookasecondstep.Dianapulledmeforward.
SuddenlyIlostmybalance.
Belowthehard-lookingsurfacewas
wet-mudsoup.
Iwas
sinkingdeeper.(陷入泥沼之中,这与蚌埠市2023届高三年级第四次教学质量检查考试—读后续写(23.5.5)[流沙地脱险]很相似)戴安娜先走。在昏暗的光线下,我看到她脚下的泥土是干的。我跟着她走到湖上,但我的脚比预想的要深陷一些。我小心翼翼地迈出第二步。戴安娜拉着我向前。突然,我失去了平衡。看似坚硬的表面下是一片湿泥。我陷得越来越深。Dianastartedtobark.
Sheknewsomethingwaswrong.Shejumpedbacktothesideofthelakeandlandedonthehardground.
Isawherreachthesafetyoftheshore.
续写第一段:Tomyamazement,Dianagrabbedtheleashinhermouthandstartedtopullme.续写第二段:"Whatonearthhashappened"mymotherasked.(根据这句话,应该是小狗狗已经把我救上来了,妈妈看到我浑身泥泞,于是问道:“发生了什么?”)戴安娜开始叫了起来。她知道出了问题。她跳回到湖边,落在了坚硬的地面上。我看到她安全地到达了岸边。续写第一段:
令我惊讶的是,戴安娜用嘴巴咬住了牵引绳,开始拉我。续写第二段:"到底发生了什么事?"妈妈问道。试水作文:续写第一段:Tomyamazement,Dianagrabbedtheleashinhermouthandstartedtopullme.Shedugherpawsinto
thehardground,
usingallherstrengthtodragmeoutofthemuddytrap.
Asshepulled,Itriedtoliftmylegs,makingiteasierforhertosaveme.
exhausted,butDiana'sdeterminationkeptmegoing.
Withherunwavering
endeavour,Ifeltthemudreleaseitsgriponme.
Itwasn'tlongbeforewebothreachedthesafetyoftheshore,
totally
drained
butrelieved.
Ihuggedhertight,overcomewithgratitude,andthenwewalkedhometogether.
续写第二段:"Whatonearthhashappened"mymotherasked.
Shecamerushingoutofthehouse,alertedbyDiana'sbarking.Ilookeddownatmymud-cakedclothesandtearsstartedstreamingdownmyface.Betweensobs,ItoldmymotherabouthowIhadnearlydrownedinthelake.
Shescoldedmefordisobeyingherwarningsnottocrossthelake.ButwhenshesawDianabymyside,herexpressionsoftened
withreliefandgratitude.
Dianastayedbymyside,hertailwaggingvigorously,asifsheknewshehadsavedmylife.Fromthatdayon,Irealizedtheimportanceoflisteningtomymother'sadviceandtheincrediblebondthatIsharedwithDiana.Shewasn'tjustapet;shewasmyhero.附:官方参考范文Tomyamazement,Dianagrabbedtheleashinhermouthandstartedtopullme.Shediditwithherfullstrength.Shewastryingtosaveme,anditwasworking.Herpullswereenoughtohelpmeinchforward.OnceIwaspulledcloseenough,Ireachedforwardandgrabbedatthebushes.Idraggedmyselfoutofthemudwithallmymight.Tiredandafraid,Iwentbacktothesafetyofourhome.MymotherwastherewhenIwalkedinthedoorwithmudalloverme."Whatonearthhashappened"mymotherasked."Ididn'tlistentoyourwarnings.I'msorry,mom,"Irepliedsheepishly.HavinglearntwhathadhappenedtoDianaandme,mymothersaidIshouldlearnalessonfromit,touchingDiana'sheadthankfully.LookingdownatDiana'slovingeyes,IknewthatIhadbeenrighttotrustmynaturalsenseonthedayIchoseher.HergreatenergywasmorethansomethingIjustneededinmylife.Becauseofit,Iwassaved.同话题补偿训练阅读下面材料,
根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
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