【题目要求】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结束语已为你写好。
【优秀满分范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChinaduringthissummervacation.I’mdelightedtolearnthatvolunteerstudentsarewantedforaChinesepaintingexhibitiontobeheldinthelocalartgallery.NowI’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Thereasonsformyapplicationareasfollows.Firstofall,havingbeenexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatefreelywithothersinEnglish.What’smore,yearsofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whichwillhelpalottokeeptheexhibitioninorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatmyrelatedknowledgewillundoubtedlyhelptheaudiencelearnmoreabouttheuniqueChineseartform.Allinall,mysenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifiedvolunteer.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua
【写作解析】
这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。
最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。
2.全国Ⅱ卷
【题目要求】
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。
注意：
1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【满分优秀范文】
DearChris,
HowiseverythinggoingIhavegoodnewstotellyou.Avolleyballmatchisgoingtobeheldinafewweeksandourteamwillparticipate.Asforthedetailedinformationofthematch,therewillbeprobablydozensofteamswhicharegoingtomakearevolvingcompetition.Additionally,notonlycanthetopthreeteamseachbeawardedamedalbutalltheotherteamstakingpartinitwillgetarewardaswell.Whatwillbethemostattractiveisthatitwillbeagreathonorforthetopthreeteamstoreceivespecialvolleyballsthathavethenameofthemostpopularvolleyballplayeronthem.Therefore,wemustdoenoughpreparationsbeforethematch,suchastrainingasfrequentlyaswecan.SoexcitedamIthatIcan’twaittojoininit.HowaboutyouLookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,LiHua
【写作指导】
本题要求：作为排球队队长李华，给队友Chris写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参加比赛，主要的要点包含三项，分别是：比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求100左右，考生应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。作文的难度不大，可以灵活运用学过的高级短语和句型，例如定语从句；名词性从句；非谓语动词；倒装句等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯；高级词汇的使用以提升作品的档次。
3.全国Ⅲ卷
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文】
DearAllen,
HowiseverythinggoingOurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSundaymorningintheschoolhall.AndI’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus.
Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Thentherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youaredefinitelywelcometoshowuponstage,whichwilladdcolorandfuntoourfestival.
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Bestwishes,
LiHua
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Howiseverythinggoingamusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
【牛师点评】
4.北京卷
第一节(15分)
1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
DearJim,
I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.
IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.
Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.
Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.
Yours,
【牛师点睛】
第二节(20分)
52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:西瓜watermelon
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LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.
Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusabouttheprogrammewiththetheme“Workingismostbeautiful”.Andhestressedtheimportanceofworkingwithourownhands.
WhenIgothome,Ipackedupmyluggageforthetrip.
Onthefarm,wehelpedpickwatermelons.Whileworking,Irealisedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.
WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme.
5.浙江卷
第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节应用文写作(满分15分)
66.假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；3.临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
DearAlex,
Learningthatyou’releavingfortheUnitedStatessoon,I’meagerlywritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelp.
Honestlyspeaking,it’ssoniceofyoutooffermeaclassofpracticallearningskills.Underyourprofessionalguidance,IhavemadesuchunbelievableprogressinEnglish.It’sindeedapleasantsurpriseformetoevenrankfirstinarecentEnglishspeechcontest.WheneverIencounterdifficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout,whichfuelsmyenthusiasmforEnglishandpromotesmetoregaintremendousconfidence.NowordsarestrongenoughtoconveyhowgratefulIam.
Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3.关键词和句子
第二节读后续写(满分25分)
67.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.
Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.
SowhatistherightamountofpraiseExpertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”
Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.
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【参考答案】
Parentstendtogotoextremeswhenitcomestopraisingtheirkids.(要点一)Yet,bothtoomuchandtoolittlepraisecanbeequallydamaging.(要点二)Whengivingpraise,parentsshouldbesincereandconcentrateontheprocessinsteadoftheresult.(要点三)Similarly,theyoughttogivepraiseforhowmuchefforttheirkidshaveinvestedintheworkthey’reinvolvedin.(要点四)
完成一篇概要写作，需要经过三个步骤，
2.组织语言，转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上，组织好语言，注重语言表达的独立性和准确性以及高级性，不全盘照抄原文句子，尽量用自己的语言转换表达，同时要注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字去表达重要的内容。
3.通读全文，逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。
6.江苏卷
LiJiang:HaveyouheardthisAgroupofexchangestudentsfromtheUKarevisitingourschoolnextmonth.SuHua:Yes,Ihave.SomearealreadyrecommendingthetraditionalChinesedressforthewelcomeceremony.LiJiang:Butitseemspeoplehavedifferentopinions.SuHua:Whatdoyouthink
LiJiang:Ithinkit’sagoodidea.It’sanopportunitytomaketheChineseculturebetterknowntointernationalstudents.
SuHua:Iagree.Butwedon’thavetodressthatway.That’snotourdailystyle.Besides,it’snotveryconvenient.LiJiang:Yousee,it’stheChineseculturethattheBritishfriendsarecomingfor.Justtherightoccasion.
SuHua:Iprefertheschooluniform.It’snice.It’salsoabetterdisplayofourschoolculture.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2.在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【优秀满分范文一】
LiJiangandSuHuaarediscussingwhattowearwhenreceivingtheBritishstudentsnextmonth.LirecommendsthetraditionalChinesedresswhileSupreferstheschooluniform.
IwouldbehappytoweartraditionalChineseclothesatthewelcomeceremony.Firstly,thisispreciselywhattheBritishvisitorsareexpecting.TheycometolearnaboutChineseculturewiththeirowneyes.TheirChinesepeersinthetypicalChinesedresswouldbehighlyimpressive.Theschooluniformsarefine,butnotspecialenoughtogiveauniqueChineseflavour.Secondly,theinconvenienceisnotaproblemifourpurposeistoshareChineseculture.Itisjusttheso-calledinconveniencethatdisplaystherichness,delicacyandgreatfascinationofChineseculturewithahistoryofthousandsofyears.
ThetraditionalChineseclothes,itseemstome,willmaketheoccasionveryChineseandinvitingtotheBritishguests.
【优秀满分范文二】
LiJiangandSuHuadon'tagreeonwhattowearwhengreetingtheBritishstudents.LisuggeststraditionalChineseclotheswhileSuthinkstheschooluniformsaremoresuitable.
IprefertheschooluniformtothetraditionalChinesedressatthewelcomeceremonynextmonth.AlthoughthetraditionalChinesedressmaylookmorebeautifulandstylish,itisalittlebitstrangetowalkaroundinit.Wefeelateaseinourschooluniformseveryday.What'smore,thetraditionalChinesedresscan'treflecttheuniquecultureofourschool.Fromthedesignandcolourofouruniforms,theBritishfriendswilllearnmoreaboutourschool.Besides,thechoiceofthetraditionalChinesedressmeansextramoney,andextratime,forwehavetochangeitbackaftertheevent.
SotheschooluniformsareabetterchoicethanthetraditionalChinesedressforsuchanoccasion.
本文是读写任务，今年的话题是关于中国传统服装的。读写任务首先要写好概括。概括短文的内容要点实为客观简要地转述作者的观点、论据和结论，概括包括两个部分：主题句和支撑句。概括注意要抓住要点，语言精练，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括。
第二段用恰当的过渡语引出自己的观点（反对或赞成）。过渡语起承上启下的作用，要显自然、连贯。提出自己的观点后要具体论证自己的观点。
7.上海卷
Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所〔博物馆还是社区图书馆〕征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2.说明你的理由〔从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比〕
【优秀范芬范文】
Towhomitmayconcern:
I’velearnedthatanartexhibitionistobeheldandthatyou’recollectingsuggestionsonitslocation.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.
Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabletoholdtheartexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.
Ononehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletogettoShanghaiMuseumwhichislocatedinthecenterofthecity.Andthemuseumismuchmorespaciousthancommunitylibraries,whichprovidesvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmentforappreciatingart.
Ontheotherhand,asawell-knownmuseum,ShanghaiMuseumismoreprofessionalandexperiencedinholdingartexhibitions.Itsprofessionalsecurityguardsandadvancedfacilitiescanbetterprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolen.
Therefore,Isuggesttheexhibitionbeheldinthemuseum.
WangMin
本次高考作文考查观点论述，题型较为常见，要求对画展的展出场所做出选择，并且说明理由，而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析，难度不算太大，要写好这篇作文，只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。
范文按照书信的形式，首先要提出给收信人，Towhomitmayconcern这里表示的是敬启者，是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语，也是除了Dearxxx之外英语书信的常见用语。
信的第一段交待了自己的身份，并且说明了些这封信的目的。
第二段明确提出了自己的观点，用了itismoreadvisabletodo...句型，说明“……是更合理的”，常用在提出建议时。段落最后用Myreasonsareasfollows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。
第【三】四段用ononehand...ontheotherhand...“一方面……；另一方面……”进行连接，层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析，博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适，其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。
最后一段用therefore简单总结并重申自己的观点。
8.天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
I’mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.
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