Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegiveninformation（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。
Don'tjudgepeoplebytheirlooks.Someonecouldbebad-lookingandstillbenice.—Katie
Whenyourfriendsdosomethingstupid，youdon'thavetofollow.—Jackie
Don'ttellateacheryourdogateyourhomework，especiallyifyoudon'thaveadog.—Alex
Lifeislikea“chooseyourownending”book-youcantakewhateveradventuresyouwant.
—Sally
（注意：1.先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸带有引号的横线上。
从历年上海中考英语作文题目可以看出，不论是何种题材，整体都是以鼓励发表自己的看法为主；秉承着让考生有话可说，有内容可写的原则，描述其思想、亲身经历、感悟；可写的角度广泛，考生可任选一个内容或者角度进行切入。
作文评分标准
中考作文一般从内容、语言、组织结构这三方面进行评分：
（一）内容（满分8）
7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。
5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。
2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。
0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。
（二）语言（满分8）
词数：每少5个单词扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写：每处错误扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。
语法：每处错误扣0.5分，同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。
（三）组织结构（满分4）
内容充实，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。
内容充实，不写废话，上下文连贯，用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。
一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
通篇句型句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。
2010年上海英语中考作文
I’mproudofmyself
范文1
Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.However,asweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup,butmyparentsencouragedme:"Impossibleisnothing,""youcouldchallengeyourself!"sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'tgetthegoodmark,IknewIwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!
范文2
Iusedtobeashygirlwithfewwords.Lastmonth,Ifailedintheexam.Ifeltsosadthatcouldn’thelpcrying.However,mymothertoldme,“Lifeisatoughroadfullofupsanddowns.Everyonehastoexperiencethelowtimes”.Herencouragingwordscheeredmeup.Therefore,Imadeupmymindtoprepareforthenextexam.Duringtheclass,Ialwayslistenedtotheteacherscarefullydidmyhomeworkattentively.Tomysurprise,Iachievedthebestgradeintheexam.Atthatmoment,Iactuallyfeltproudofmyselfbecauseofachievingsuccessandcourage.Now,I’mmoreactivethanbeforeandIalwaysbelieveaslongasyoukeeptrying,youwillsucceedatlast.
2011年上海英语中考作文
I’mamemberof________
I’mamemberofmyfamily
I’mamemberofmyfamily.Wealwayshelpeachotherandwealwaysfacedifficultiestogether.Whenmyfatherlosthisjob,mymumandIalwaysencouragedhimtobeconfidence.WhenI’mstillwritinghomeworkateleveno’clock,myparentswillgivemeacupofmilkandapieceofbread.Theywon’tsleepuntilIhavefinishedallhomework.WeloveeachotherandI’mgladtobeamemberofmyfamily.
I’mamemberofthereadingclub
I’mamemberofthereadingclub.WhenIwasinmychildhood,Itookupreadingasmyhobby.NowI’mamemberofthereadingclub.Ifeelverydelightedforthesimplereasonthatallofthemembersshareourownbookswitheachother.Evenifwereadthebooksfrommorningtillnight,wenevergettiredofreading.ItissowonderfulandhelpfulthatIenjoyeverypageofit.Inmyopinion,readingistothemindwhatexerciseistothebody.Thankstothereadingclub,itenablesmylifetobemorecolorfulandmeaningful.
2012年上海英语中考作文
Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据所给情景一封不少于60词的信)
SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.WhatdoyouthinkTrytoofferhersomeadvice.（假如你是Joe,你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）
DearBetty,
I’msorrytoknowthatyouareworriedaboutacomingexambecauseofcaringtoomuchabouttheresult.There’snoneedtoworryaboutitbecauseyouarealwaysgoodatstudy.What’smore,it’snecessaryforustoknowhowmuchknowledgewehavemasteredbytakinganexam.Ithinkyoushoulddohaveagoodrestinsteadofdoingtoomuchexercisebecauseitmaymakeyoumorenervous.Besides,youcanshareyourfeelingswithyourclassmates.It’susefultoshareyourbademotionwithothers,whichhelpsyoufeelbetter.Ibelievethatyouwilltryyourbesttoovercometheupsetemotionanddowellintheexam.
Yours,
Joe.
I’mgladthatyou’dliketoshareyourfeelingswithme.Inmyopinion,there’snopointworryingaboutanexamtoomuch.Foronething,takingexamsisacommonthinginastudent’slifesothatyou’dbetternotcaretoomuchabouttheresult.Foranother,youalwayshavegiftforstudy.Herearesomewaystohelpyoudealwiththeupsetfeelings.First,youcanlistentomusicwhichmakesyouhavehappyemotions.Second,youshouldpayattentiontohowtosolvetheproblemsinsteadofthescore.Ibelievethatyouwilltryyourbesttoovercometheupsetemotionanddowellintheexam.
Joe
2013年上海英语中考作文
Howtoprotectmyself
Asastudent,Ithinkitimportantformetoprotectmyselffromdangerousfiresituations.Firstofall,Imustcalmdownassoonaspossible,forpanickingisofnohelp.Then,asisknowntoall,calling119immediatelyisthemosteffectivewaytosavemyself.What’smore,itisbesttotakethestairsinsteadofelevators.Inconclusion,withpositiveattitudesandsufficientpreparations,Iwillbeabletoprotectmyselffromfires.
AterriblefireinJilintookmanypeople’slivesrecentlyandbroughtendlesspainstoalargenumberoffamilies.SoifIwerecausedinafire,Iwouldtrymybesttoprotectmyself.First,Iwouldstaycalm.Acoolheadcanpreventmefromtakingrashactionsandhelppickoutarightsolutionimmediately.Then,Iwouldcall119withmyexactlocationandthesituation.Mostimportantly,Iwouldcovermyselfwithwetclothesandmademywaytothesecureplace.Withabovetips,Iwillsurelybeabletoprotectmyselffromfires.
2014年上海英语中考作文
Thistimenextyear
It'sexcitingtoimaginewhatthehappylifewillbelike.
Atthistimenextyear,Iwillbeaseniorhighstudent,andIwillmakealotofnewfriends.IhopetobemoreindependentsothatperhapsIwillbetakingpartinasummercampabroadtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Besides,IwillhelpmyparentsdohouseworkinordertoknowhowtotakecareofmyselfwhenIamalone.
Lifewillbetotallydifferent,butI'mreallylookingforwardtoit.
Lifeischangeable,andthat'swhyeveryonelongsforthefuture,whichisfullofchallengeaswellashope.
PerhapsIwillhaveachievedmygoalthistimenextyear,studyinginaseniorhighschool.Despitethat,diligencewillbestillneededtomakemyselfgofurtherinEnglish.Basically,itisimportanttoconcentrateinclassandtakenotescarefully.Moreover,IwillbenefitfromreadingEnglishbooks.What’smore,goingabroadisofgreatuseinimprovingmyoralEnglish.OnlyinthiswaycanIprogressinEnglishendlessly.
MakeplansandgoforwhatIwant.AndIbelievewhenthechallengeiscoming,thehopeisalsoaroundthecorner.
2015年上海英语中考作文
Iwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot
Iwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itwillbeextremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:
First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.
Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.
Itisnotuncommontomeettrafficproblemsandseriousairpollutioninbigcity.Itisamusttohaveaplantoimprovetheseriouscondition.
Igetanideatodesignmyownflyingmachinelikeacarwhichcandrivewellinthestreetaswellasflybetweenthehighrisestoavoidthetrafficjam.What’smore,whenitismoving,itcantransformthemotionenergyintoelectricitytodrivetheengine.Thus,itispossibletosavealotoffuelandreducetheairpollution.Itisofgreatusetosolvetheproblemsoftrafficjamandairpollution,andevensavethenaturalresource.
Brightideacanonlybeachievedwiththedeterminationandcourage.Ibelievemyideawillturnanewleafoffuturelife.
2016年上海英语中考作文
I’mReady
Ihavealwaysbeenlongingforstudyingabroad,whichisfullofchallengesaswellasopportunities.Therefore,whatIshoulddoistogetreadyanytime.
Astheysay,chancefavorsthepreparedmind.Ialwaysgetmyselfreadybothphysicallyandmentally.First,Iinsistontakingexerciseregularlytobuildupmybody.Besides,IsparenoefforttolearnEnglishwellinordertointegrateintothenewenvironmentassoonaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,itisnecessarytocultivateashinnyoptimisticattitudetowardsdifficulties.
Withgreatpassionanddetermination,Iamwellpreparedanddeeplyconvincedthatachallengingbutfulfillingstudylifeiswaitingforme.
Franklyspeaking,I’vedreamedofbeinganexcellentphotographersincemychildhood.Thefeelingofcapturingthebeautifulscenery,thecharmingsmileandtheunforgettablemomentofourlifedefinitelyattractmealot.Therefore,Itriedtogainalotofbasicknowledgeofphotographyandtookpartinthephotographcompetitioninourschool.
Tomysatisfaction,Iwonthefirstprize.WhatIplantodoistoparticipateina‘photographyclub.Inthisway,Iwillnotonlyacquirefantastictheoriesaboutphotographybutalsolearnagreatmanyvaluableskillsthroughinteractionwithmyfriends.
IwillsparenoefforttorealizemydreamandIamdefinitelyreadytoembracemypromisingfuture：tobeanexcellentphotographer.
2017年上海英语中考作文
Thereisalwayshope.
Lifeisfullofupsanddowns,soismymiddleschoollife.
Iusedtobeaweakgirlwhohadlostheartinvariousphysicalactivities.EverytimeIwasfacedwithaphysicalexam,Icouldn'thelpsweatingandfeelingnervous.However,afterIreadanarticleaboutamanwhowasbornwithoutarmsandlegs,everythingchanged.Insteadoflosinghopeandgivingup,hemanagedtolivelikeanormalperson.Throughhisstory,Isuddenlyrealizedthatthereisalwayshopeandnothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.Unexpectedly,Ifinallystartedtomakeprogressinphysicalactivities!
Afterall,hopeneverfailstomakeamiracle,doesit
IvisitedGuzhuangVillageinGuangxiwithmymotherlastyear.Thechildrenareofmyagebutliveadifferentlife:potatoistheirdailyfoodandmeatisaluxury;parentsworkinbigcitiesandseldomcomeback;theirclassroomisa“shelter”-coldinwinterandhotinsummer.Theirlifeisfullofhardship,however,Icanseehopeandhappinessintheireyes:thehopethattheirlifewillbechangedwiththeirownefforts.StephenHawkingoncesaid“Nobodyshouldlosehopehoweverbadthesituationis”.Icouldn’treallyunderstandthisuntilthatday.
2018年上海英语中考作文
Myprogress
Iusedtobeashygirlwhodarenotexchangemyideaswithmyclassmates,whichisextremelybadformystudy.Therefore,Imadeupmymindtobecomemoreoutgoing.Atfirst,itwastoughformetoinvolvemyselfinthegroupdiscussionortojoininafter-schoolactivities.Luckily,withtheencouragementfrommyfriends,Imanagedtoexpressmyownthoughtsanddosomevolunteeringinmysparetime.ItseemsthatIamnotthatshygirlanymore,whichisdefinitelyagreatprogressIhaveevermade.
Justasanoldsayinggoes,athousand-lijourneybeginswiththefirststep.Howeverdifficultitis,Ishouldtakethefirststepandmakeprogresslittlebylittle.
IusedtobepooratEnglish,especiallyinreadingandwriting,whichIconsiderextremelydifficult.Thebiggestproblemwasthatafterreadingapassage,Icouldn’tfullyunderstandit,whichmakesmefeelverydepressedandfrustrated.ButIkeptonreadingdifficultEnglisharticlesinsteadofjustgivingup.AndIalsopracticedEnglishwritingwheneverIhadachance.Gradually,ImaderemarkableprogressinEnglishandgainedalotofconfidencethroughmyconstanteffort.Asyoucanimagine,nothingmakesmeprouderthanfeelingmyprogressinEnglish.Mydearreader,aslongasyoubravelyfaceyourweaknessesandtakeeffectivewaystoovercomethem,Ibelieveyouwill,likeIdo,beabletoseeyourprogressinyourself.
2019年上海英语中考作文
作文使用D篇阅读文本中的四条感悟作为提示，请学生结合自身经历谈谈感悟：
1.Whenyourfrienddoessomethingstupid,youdon'tneedtofollow.
2.judgeabookbyitscover.
3.Lifeisabookinwhichyoucanchooseyourending.
4.Youshouldn'ttellyourteacherthatyourdogateyourhomework,especiallyyoudon'thaveadog.
Don'tjudgeabookbyitscover.
Manypeople,sometimesmyselfincluded,tendtojudgeapersonbyhisappearances.
Iwasafraidofmyunclewhohasascaredtattooonhisarmtillmymothertoldmea“story”.WhenIwasathree-year-oldnaughtboy,Ialwaysranaroundtheneighborhoodwithmytoysaber.Unfortunately,onedayIhitawilddogbyaccident.Thedogbecamecrazyandtriedtobiteme.Itwasthattimemyuncleappearedandprotectedmewithhisstrongarm.However,thisaccidentleftascaronhisarm.Myunclewenttogetatattooinordertocoverupthescars.Fromthatmoment,heismyheroinsteadofabadlookinguncle.
Therefore,weneedtogobeyondpeople’slooksandfocusonmoreinternalspiritsinordertotrulyjudgeaperson.
Honestyisgold
Honesty,asfarasIamconcerned,isoneofthemostimportantvirtuesinone’slife.Andifyoukeephonesttoothers,youwillreceivethehonestyaswell.Instead,ifyoulietosomeone,theonlyyoucangetisanotherlie.
WhenIwassevenyearsold,mydeskmateTomboughtanewpencilbox.ItlookssoprettythatIlikeditverymuch.Shamefully,Itookhispencilboxwithouttellinghimanythingandhecriedalotwhenhefoundthathispencilboxwasgone.Afterseveraldays,Ican’tbearthiskindofcontradiction,soIreturnedhispencilboxandconfessedthatitwasmewhohadstolenhispencilbox.Tomysurprise,hedidn’tblamemebutgaveitbacktomeasagift.
Fromthenon,IrealizedthatIcanneverlietoanyoneagain.Honestyisamustnotonlyforfriendshipbutalsoforourwholesocietyasitisthefundamentalthingbetweenpeopleandthestabilityofthedevelopmentofourmotherland.